Sample answer by Tony
Nowadays, people’s living is being difficult. Therefore many people believe that, the working is necessary for both parents. However, others feel that, such kind of incomes impact badly on children. In the following paragraphs, I will give some opinions of the people support their arguments before giving personal points on the issue.
On one hand, there are some major reasons to support the good side of the debate. Some people think that, in family parents must go out to work and they need to earn more money. This could be because, now every person needs money for nice living. It is in fact that, people need money for eating, children’s kindergarten, school, clothes and their other needs. That’s why, some people consider that it is necessary for both parents to go out to work.
Nonetheless, on the other hand of the debate, more people argue that that, if both parents go to work, children’s behavior will change to bad side. It is actual fact, nowadays more and more people are leaving their children at home. Usually, they go out to work in the morning and come in the evening. As a result, many children do what they want, as an example, occupying with small crimes, vagrant and other uncontrolled activities. Even, these children will do serious crimes in the future. Therefore, more people refuse this idea.
To draw a conclusion, after analyzed of both negative and positive sides of both parents going out to work, it is my feeling that, indeed, in today’s world, no one can live better without additional incomes, nevertheless, persons need to spare sometime for their children apart from their work.